F.+Midterm+Essay

“Why I deserve 100 percent”   I deserve a perfect score on my essay, because I do my best in school as the best I can be. I also have goals toward my education that make me want to try even harder. I put long hours and focusing on my work in my essays. Going to college is a good motivation I use to do my   best. I deserve 100 percent, because I put countless amounts of effort in my work, I try to strive for my best, and I have long term goals which give me confidence, diligence, and motivation for trying hard.   I put a multitude of effort in my essays to give them a good enough of an edge to get an   excellent grade on them. I put long hours just setting in front of the computer to get done my   papers just to make them as perfect as possible. Unlike many students who want to just get it   over with I try and put much hard work in it. I never procrastinate either; I always do my   assignments on time without hassle at all. I take school seriously, because I strive to achieve.   I have long term goals that are a great source of motivation that drive my determination to   <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">make my assignments perfectly. After high school I plan to go to college and I need a high GPA <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">in order to get a good variety of colleges that I can get in to. If I feel like I need to give up on an   <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">essay I think to myself, “Is this what I will become, a quitter.” After listening to myself I get <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">right back on track of working. This motivation is what will make the difference of my future <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">and my hard work. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> The teachers that grade the assignments grade thousands of essays like this one. Some <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">teachers do not see any potential in many students who simply do not try at all. This makes it   <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">hard to get an excellent score, because they simply do not think many students can pull it off, but <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">those who can such as, me deserve a good grade. My teacher might also think there are many <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">errors in her student’s papers or ones that only try until they reach a certain breakpoint. I assure <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">this essay is as flawless as I can produce it. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> I deserve a perfect score, because I try hard in school. Unlike students who do not care I   <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">do and I believe my essay is different from that of other people that whoever focuses and puts <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">hard enough effort in it deserves 110 percent. I also have a future to account for if I succeed. I   <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">will also continue to try after I graduate both high school and college. That is why I deserve 100 <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;">percent on this essay. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%;"> Andrew Hall